帮我看一下这个英语句子哪里错了

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帮我看一下这个英语句子哪里错了
For we are living as a family,would you please consider paying the costs of damage with me?
看在我们像一个家似的住在一起的份上,请考虑一下我们共同承担损失的费用好么
我用OFFIC 打出来的时候 它总提示有语法错误
我觉得也有点别扭

As we are living as a family,would you please consider us sharing the costs of damage?