看看我英文作文中有没有错误·
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看看我英文作文中有没有错误·
I think children who have freedom can have more space to think than the children who are forced to do anything.
我想表达：拥有*的孩子比那些总是*去做某事的孩子有更多思考的空间.
答
I visited my friend at afterafterl.这一句去掉中间 at .直接就是 after school .Then I went to home .这句去掉中间的to.go home 就是回家的意思了,不用加介词to了.