帮我看一下这篇英文作文里有没有错误I'm tried to forget this day because I realy don't like growing up.The beforetime,I was always hoping my birthday,because of the birthday cake and the gifts.There weren't any gifts or cakes in my birthday this year.I'm already 23 years old.I miss the past time so much.I was old a year old.（我想说我又老了一岁）So I did't think that the birthday is a happy thing.That's why I didn't celebrate my birthday this year.Anyway,Happy Birthday To Me!Octob

really你打错了，其他没问题
I'm tried to forget this day because I really don't like growing up.
The beforetime，I was always hoping my birthday，because of the birthday cake and the gifts.
There weren't any gifts or cakes in my birthday this year.
I'm already 23 years old. I miss the past time so much.
I was old a year old.（我想说我又老了一岁）So I didn’t think that the birthday is a happy thing.
That's why I didn't celebrate my birthday this year.
Anyway，Happy Birthday To Me！

I'm tried to forget …………
要不用I was tried to forgot 要不用i'm try to forget
the pass years, i aslways expected my birthday, just for the cake and gifts.
weren't 用 there is no; 后用 to my birthday
I'm already 23 years old. 你想说：我已经23岁了。此处用 I was即可
I was old a year old.（I was went up a year)
So I did't (So I don't); I didn't celebrate (I didn't holded the birthday celebration this year)
Happy Birthday To Me ( me改成myself)
不要伤感，生老病死谁都无法避免。
Anywahy, Happy birthday to you!

说实话，这篇文章要大改，不光是语法错很多，而且感觉很chinglish

修改如下：
I'm tried to forget this day because I really don't like growing up.
In the past，I was always hoping my birthday，because of the birthday cake and the gifts.
There weren't any gifts or cakes in my birthday this year.
I'm already 23 years old. I miss the past so much.
I was one year older.（我想说我又老了一岁）So I didn't think that the birthday was a happy thing.
That's why I didn't celebrate my birthday this year.
Anyway，Happy Birthday To Me！
这样基本可以了。really打成realy;beforetime是很古老的词，不推荐用;I was old a year old这句比较乱，我改了。

I tried to forget these days (the day, 不清楚你要表达的具体是什么, 也许是生日 ,那就是the day) because i really hate growing up. I used to expect my birthday a lot because of birthday cake and gifts. Now, i am 23, and i miss the days gone by.
I did not get any gifts nor cake on my birthday this year.
i am 23 now, i miss the days gone by.
I do not think birthday can make me happy now, because i get one year older on my birthday.
That is why i did not celebrate my birthday this year.
Anyway, "Happy birthday to me!"

很多错误，包括拼写

I was old a year old.（我想说我又老了一岁）这一句不地道。可以说是Chinglish,即中国式英语。
可改为I have be older one year than before,现在完成时，表示相对现在已经发生过的事，而且结果对现在的影响还存在。

I'm tried to forget this day because I realy don't like growing up.
“I'm”的意思是“我是”,而你这里要用的应该是“我曾经”,所以应该是“I have”或者是“I've”
[I've tried to forget this day because I really don't like growing up.]
The beforetime,I was always hoping my birthday,because of the birthday cake and the gifts.
不需要说“以前”,直接把句子变成过去试就可以了.另外beforetime是中国英语,以后绝对不可以用.
[I have always been hopeful for my birthday, because of the birthday cake and the gifts.]
There weren't any gifts or cakes in my birthday this year.
我觉得直接把句子继续下去更好一点.翻译是：可是今年并没有礼物或蛋糕.
[This year however, there were neither gifts or cakes.]
I'm already 23 years old. I miss the past time so much.
句号改成逗号了.past time的time是多余的,另外没什么问题.
[I'm already 23 years old, I miss the past so much.]
I was old a year old.（我想说我又老了一岁）So I did't think that the birthday is a happy thing.
我又大了一岁,过生日不再有趣了.
[I am another year older, birthdays are no longer exciting.]
That's why I didn't celebrate my birthday this year.
Anyway,Happy Birthday To Me!
每次只要有人用“anyway”,我就会觉得怪怪的,应该用“anyways”更好一点.可是在这里用“nevertheless”（意思是“尽管如此⋯⋯”）更加professional一点吧.
[Nevertheless, happy birthday to me.]
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And happy birthday to you!

很多错误