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有英语达人没,
The Social Responsibility of Business is to Increase Its Profits,by Friedman,seems to directly support a free-enterprise society.Friedman’s article argues that corporations do not need to be said to have social responsibility,they can make profit maximum.
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seems前加which,或者seems to directly support a free-enterprise society改成seemingly supporting a free-enterprise society directly
第二句感觉怪怪的,corporations do not need to be said to have social responsibility,里面be said to 感觉有点多余,让人读起来有些不舒服.they can make profit maximum前面加and that,变成 and thatthey can make profit maximum,一个句子有多个宾语从句的话,第二个及其以后的宾语从句的that不能省略的.