自己写的英语打油诗``帮忙修改一下Although I practiced math every day.I got a sad grad.It nearly cut my head.Mom asked me to find out mistake.I told her I’m not bad.She smiled and went away.The school meeting is coming next day.I just want to be dead.I realized I’m really afraid.I’m afraid what the teacher will say.I’m afraid when it will rain.I’m afraid of the aggressive dad.I hope math teacher to be kind.Be kind to the girl who wants to cry.有没有可以帮我加几行?还有什么语法错误也帮忙改下!

自己写的英语打油诗``帮忙修改一下
Although I practiced math every day.
I got a sad grad.
It nearly cut my head.
Mom asked me to find out mistake.
I told her I’m not bad.
She smiled and went away.
The school meeting is coming next day.
I just want to be dead.
I realized I’m really afraid.
I’m afraid what the teacher will say.
I’m afraid when it will rain.
I’m afraid of the aggressive dad.
I hope math teacher to be kind.
Be kind to the girl who wants to cry.
有没有可以帮我加几行?
还有什么语法错误也帮忙改下!