帮忙改正这几句话的语法错误（怎样写更通顺）
问题描述：
帮忙改正这几句话的语法错误（怎样写更通顺）
besides he,there are many white heros.they help black people to struggle against the civil-rights.
答
Other than him,there are many heros with white skin,all of them are helping the balck people to struggle for the civil rights.