请帮忙看看这句话里有没有语法错误

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请帮忙看看这句话里有没有语法错误
I have a dream that feels so real,because being with you makes it feel real,but maybe it's time for me to open my eyes

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because being with you makes it feel real可以把feel去掉,去掉后的意思就是 因为与你在一起使梦变得真实,我觉得这样更符合表达.不然it的所指就很模糊.