求改语法错误

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求改语法错误
When you reach for me​raising spirits high​god knows that​I’ll be the one​standing by​through good and through trying times劳烦把它改成语法正确通顺的句子

when you reach for me, raising spirits high.God knows that I’ll be the one standing by through good and through trying times.大意:“当你来到我身边时,要情绪高亢,上帝知道我会是那个无论风雨都坚守的人.”
改正:when you reach(去掉for)me,raise (去掉ing) spirits high. God knows that I’ll be the one standing by through good and through trying times.