英语高手可以帮忙看看这段话有没有什么问题吗?
问题描述：
英语高手可以帮忙看看这段话有没有什么问题吗?
As is symbolically depicted in the cartoon,two men are playing a football game.What makes the drawing striking is the fact that the player who is kicking out the football is thinking the guarder is so powerful that he could hardly succeed,but the guarder is considering himself weaker than that player.
答
As is symbolically depicted in the cartoon,two men are playing a football game.What makes the drawing striking is the fact that the player,who is kicking out the football,is thinking that the guarder（用defence比较好） is too powerful to breakthrough ,but the guarder is considering himself weaker than that player.
我觉得总体没有什么问题,就是从句套从句,有点过于复杂,那个succeed意思表达的不够明确.