高中英语改错题,帮忙改下,速度!在线等!

高中英语改错题,帮忙改下,速度!在线等!
一共有十个错误!高手帮忙!Now I'd like to tell you someting about your past-time job this summer vacation,in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired.I think it was helpful to work this holiday.It was the first time I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family.I used to keep on ask them for money,and now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent.I've learnt how to get along well with others.What's worse,I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt what can't be learnt from textbooks.All these will be good for my future.In the word,I had a wonderful and available summer vacation.