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原文:随着数字影像技术和Internet技术的不断发展,可以用一个专用的播放软件在互联网上播放全景图像,用户可用鼠标和键盘控制观察全景的方向,可左可右可近可远,使您感到就在真实的环境当中浏览大好风光.
我的译文:With the constant development of digital image technology and internet technology, panorama photography can be displayed through internet with special player software. With the help of mouse and keyboard, users can view the panorama photography, and also can zoom in and out or turn left and right of the whole picture as they like, which makes viewer feel that they are just enjoying the beautiful scenery on the spot.

With the constant development of digital imaging and Internet technologies, panorama images can be displayed online through a special software. With the help of computer mouse and keyboard, viewers ca...