这段英语有很多错的地方

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这段英语有很多错的地方
paul used to be short ,and have short hair ,like playing piano,watch and play computer.He is used to be outgoing ,but now he is tall and have long hair ,like playing the piano,reading book.

Paul used to be shorter,had short hair,and liked playing piano,watching TV and playing computer games.He used to be outgoing.Now he is tall,has long hair,and likes playing the piano and reading books.
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