高分求做一道高中短文改错

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高分求做一道高中短文改错
是短文改错today is sunday.the sky is full of sunshine,so does my life.at about 9 a.m.,i went to the bookstore with my friend,toby and kate ,where there were many books.i did not know which one to buy because the books were all useful to me.at last,i choose two.at 10.00,we went to cinema.the movie called titanic was very popular.it took us about 3 hours to see it.having seen the film,and everyone was deeply moving.some even burst out tears.form the story,i understand what love is.that is a really wonderful movie,which is very worth seeing again.what a happy day!i hope tomorrow i will be even happpy!

根据个人看法 只找出这么多,见谅 1friend--friends 2were--are 3choose--chose 4cinima前面加定冠词the 5see--watch 6moving--moved 7out--into 8even 后面加more(这个不太确定)