高中短文改错,共有十处错误.麻烦英语学得好的人帮忙做一下啊.
高中短文改错,共有十处错误.麻烦英语学得好的人帮忙做一下啊.
Last Saturday,I put my wallet in the bag which was at back of my bike.I rode for about half an hour.As I neared my home I found that I kept the bag opening all the way.The wallet had fallen out somewhere in the way,it made me upset.Just then I received a phone call saying that my neighbor is waiting for me.Someone had sent it to my home.I felt very pleasing and I went home at once.It was turned out that I put my ID card in the wallet.No one was at home for he gave it to my neighbor.I've never found out what he was because he didn't tell my neighbors his name when he left.
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Last Saturday,I put my wallet in the bag which was at THE back of my bike.I HAD rode for about half an hour.As I CAME near my home I found that I kept the bag opening all the way.The wallet had fallen out somewhere ON the way,it made me upset.Just then I received a phone call saying that my neighbor WAS waiting for me.Someone had sent it to my home.I felt very PLEASED and I went home at once.It TUENED out that I put my ID card in the wallet.No one was at home,SO he gave it to my neighbor.I've never found out WHO he was because he HADN'T TOLD my neighbors his name when he left.