求检查语法错误并修改
问题描述：
求检查语法错误并修改
My Birthday
My birthday is June 7th .It’s a hot day. But I'm very exercited. Because my parents will give me some gifts. They gave me a novel last birthday. And they gave me a beautiful book bag. What did they give me some candies for my birthday. My mom buys birthday cake every birthday. What will they give me for my birthday? I don’t know, but I know they can’t give me book bags and novels.
答
第二句：it's a hot day,不是很好.你这么写好像是没年的6月7日都是很热的,如果下雨呢?有点儿绝对哦.改成 It's usually a hot day.第三句中的exercited是拼写错误的单词.改为excited,激动.第四句,不要用将来时will,因...