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这段话有语法错误吗?顺便修饰一下
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We went to Warwick Castle today.There was a large square about4000squares.Many tourists stood around the spuare.Two knight were introduce many kinds of weapons in the middle of the square.There are a great number of wax figures and armors in the castle.The most popular thing is the Warwick ghosts.I bought three tickets for two classmates and I,because I was really interested but feared.Oh,it was extremely scary,I don't want to think it again.In the afternoon,we visited 莎士比亚故居(这怎么翻译啊),kind of boring.

错误的地方:1.There has a large square and the square is about 4000squaers.
2.Two knigets were ineroduced...
3.because I was really interested about it but feared about it.
4.scary and I...
翻译是:sharespare's old house
最后一句是:It was boring.