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As time goes on,technology becomes an essential part in human’s daily life.Airplane is one of the necessary tool for travel,study and visit families.However,there are another group of public is not comply with it,they believe environment is more important and airplane wastes resources and damages our living places.
On one hand,increasly amount of students are going to overseas to improve their learning and development.Firstly,plane is the only resource to help them go on aboard.Which is faster,safer and easier.In addition,there are many people’s family members immigrate to overseas,so visit them by air would be the only choice.For example,it only takes 11 hours from China to New Zealand.Therefore,students can also go back to their country whenever they prefer.
On the other hand,a long journey costs thousands of petrol,which means earth mother has to provid lots of resources to satisfy human.It is not only give more burdens to the ecology,but also the exhaust gas would occurs environmental problem to the sky,such as acid rain.It is the revenge from nature.
Therefore,we may can modify this phenomeno by decrease the chance of using airplane to travel,or even invent some different kind of environmentally friendly fuel for the plane.It is not only helped environment,but also benefit our next generations.
In the conclusion,plane is our compulsory tool for the business and study,but still we can not just care only for money and convince,look forward to the further benefit would be more important.