大侠们找找看这英文的语法错误!

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大侠们找找看这英文的语法错误!
And for some people,if,without it,life would be a perpetual struggle against self-condemnation.

if引导的条件状语从句,主谓宾没错啊,时态也对,只是,句式不对,点那么多逗号做什么,在插入语前后就可以了,if后面无需停顿