自己写了个英语短文,麻烦大家指出语法错误,或有什么更好的表达方式,
问题描述：
自己写了个英语短文,麻烦大家指出语法错误,或有什么更好的表达方式,
How to improve the efficiency of studying English?
First ,we must have great interest in english
Second,we should practice English every day
Last,if we had condition,we shouldcommunicate with foreigner
If you can accept my advices.your English must have an improvement sooner or later
答
foreigner 切记,英语单词可数的要不有冠词,要不用复数,不可这样用（除了特殊短语等）所以此处用 foreigners更好.
advices该词无复数,要想用可用suggestions
if we had condition,we shouldcommunicate with foreigner 用了虚拟语气,不错