自己写了个英语短句,麻烦高手帮忙指出语法错误.或者有什么更好的表达方式,谢过了~selfless mother loveI can’t find a person like my mother,she always gives me the expensive gifts,but she buys a cheap clothes for herself once a year.No matter how tired she is ,if I want to do sth,she always play with me.At last,I want to tell everybody my mother is good at everyting,she is amazing enough to protect me
自己写了个英语短句,麻烦高手帮忙指出语法错误.或者有什么更好的表达方式,谢过了~
selfless mother love
I can’t find a person like my mother,she always gives me the expensive gifts,but she buys a cheap clothes for herself once a year.
No matter how tired she is ,if I want to do sth,she always play with me.
At last,I want to tell everybody my mother is good at everyting,she is amazing enough to protect me
太汉语化了~~~ 太口语化了~~~~
有点中国式的写法了。可以找些国外的原版书阅读，增强语感。
grammar没什么问题，就是内容好像有点问题吧
The Selfless Maternal Love
I can’t find a person like my mother, who is always giving me expensive gifts, but only buys herself a piece of cheap clothing once a year.
No matter how tired she is , she will satisfy me if I want to do sth.
At last, I want to tell everybody my mother is very capable, she is strong enough to protect me.
I love my mother!
语法上没什么问题,但写得有点中国式了.我试着修改一下：I can't find a person like my mother who always gives me many expensive gifts,but she often buys cheap chothes for herself,Besides, she always satis...