自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.或者有什么更好的表达方式.We live in a society that is filled with competition and cheat,which makes us tired.Only when we are in home,the comfortable would be really to come into being.

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自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.或者有什么更好的表达方式.
We live in a society that is filled with competition and cheat,which makes us tired.Only when we are in home,the comfortable would be really to come into being.