请帮忙找错,Shopping in the Future
问题描述：
请帮忙找错,Shopping in the Future
I think shopping on the internet will be more and more popular in the future.Because on-line shopping is very convenient and efficient.Whenever and wherever you are,you can buy anything you want.Hoever,I don't think that retail stores will disappear someday.To some people shopping is not only to buy something,it is a lifeway to getting relax.
答
Whenever and wherever you are改成
Whenever it is and wherever you are
Hoever
However
someday不用改
to buy something改为
buying something
to getting
改为get
不能保证全对
但我改的都是对的