请英语高手看看有没有错误,请指正
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请英语高手看看有没有错误,请指正
I went to bed on eleven o'clock yesterday night.when i wake up,it's so cold outside and still was light rain.I felt so tired that slept for a while .soon i fell asleep again.It was twenty minutes to seven when i wake up.Now it's time for me to hurry up!I dressed shoes ,washed face with cold water.the worset,i didn't eat breakfast and hurride to school .luckly,I arrived at school on time.so lucky day!
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I went to bed on eleven o'clock yesterday (last) night.when i wake (woke) up,it's so cold outside and still (was) light (little) rain.I felt so tired (that slept for a while).soon i fell asleep again....