帮我看看语法有问题吗?

问题描述:

帮我看看语法有问题吗?
hello everyone
Nice to meet you
My name is Jin Dongjun
You can call me Charles
I want to be a good cook
This is my dream
i need this chance
I will work hard every day
I hope to get everyone's help
Thank you

没有,但句子太简单了