看一下这作文有什么错误的地方?

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看一下这作文有什么错误的地方?
Yesterday was Lucy's brithday.Jim performed mugic tricks.Lily recite a poem.Jane didn't dance the disco,but she perform ballet.Maria play the guitar.Ann sang a song at the party.This party was very wonderful.They had a good time.

Yesterday was Lucy's brithday.Jim performed magic tricks.Lily recited a poem.Jane didn't dance the disco,but she performed ballet.Maria played the guitar.Ann sang a song at the party.This party was ve...