看一下哪里语法不规范? 顺便帮改下

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看一下哪里语法不规范? 顺便帮改下
With the rapid development of science and technology, many inventions, one of which is the disposable plastic bag, have been made to make our daily life convenient.

With the rapid development of science and technology,many inventions,such as disposable plastic bag,have made our daily life convenient.