大家能帮看看我的语法有错误吗?

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大家能帮看看我的语法有错误吗?
we can make a comparison from the two pictures.the whole structure,including it's wing and tail even its head were imitated the bird.我想表达的意思是,从这两张图片的对比中我们可以发现,飞机的整个结构,包括飞机的翅膀,尾翼,头部都是在模仿鸟儿.我一直觉得最后一句的were imitated有点问题,我在这想用一个一般过去时,我是不是应该要把were去掉,还是说把were换成are?怎么用比较好?或者说句子是对的?

是的,把were换成are.