英语高手请进~有篇文章想让大家修改一下~~

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英语高手请进~有篇文章想让大家修改一下~~
.when the saw falling,he killed his wife(当电锯落下时,他杀了他的妻子.). The video only have two minutes, but it record the end of the lifecompetely.(视频只有短短两分钟,但它却完整记录了一个生命的结束.)

with the saw falling ,he killed his wife .The video recorded the end of a life compeletly in just two minutes.
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