帮我看看这句英文有语法错误么?
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帮我看看这句英文有语法错误么?
Can I say to you?I wish to give you the joyful songs and sweet cake.I wish all the happiness in this earth will make you a skining star!
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may I talk to you?I wish to give you some joyful songs and a sweet cake.I wish all the happiness in this earth will make you be a shining star!