看下面的文章有没有错误.
问题描述：
看下面的文章有没有错误.
Hello everyone:
My name is Mike.I am 15 years old.I am a little shy.I am interested in listening to music.I like chatting with my friends on the Internt.I think the most important thing for me is to have a great number of friends.I hope I can become your friend soon.Thank you!
如果发现有错误、不妥的地方请指出,并写出改正后的句子.
答
internet拼错啦
I hope I can become your friend soon （can最好用will,因为can表示能力,并不能直接按中文的想法翻译）