这篇英语文章有没有什么语病错误?

这篇英语文章有没有什么语病错误?
Good morning teacher,I am glad to be here for your interview.My name is xulianghong,I come from Chengdu university of technology,and I major in accounting.My hometown is Chengdu ,a city which you come from,and never want to leave .I love my hometown very much,because in my mind it's a splendid city.it's a place of leisure and eden of the east.it's colorful and charming.It's also reflected in various local snacks.U might doze off in all the comfort here.
I enjoy learning English.At the beginning of learning English,I resisted learning it with my energy ,because I was enforced by my teacher and parents.But now,I love it,and enjoy it.( why u love it?) I think the most important skill in English is speaking,as English is a skill of communication.I will have sense of achievement when I communicate with people in English.
Which subject I like best is marketing,because I think it is very interesting,and I can get a lot of knowledge from the class,which was very important in my future job.I dislike subject is Marxist Theory.It’s very dull!
In my spare time ,I prefer travelling and cooking For the coming winter holiday ,I'm planning a trip of jiuzaigou with my classmates.I make no doubt of it will be impressive.
my college life is so freedom that I have enough time to do something that I like.such as reading some novels,taking part in some activities ,and I think it’s different from the life in middle school.
That’s all.