Please point out the gramma and spelling.
Please point out the gramma and spelling.
Dear Mr.Frederique Devos
How are you?How is your buisness?I hope this e-mail find you well.Thanks for your support in Catering Concept.
I am going to tell you that we are set to attend the 26th China International Furniture Fair (Guangzhou) from 3th to 6th Sept,2010.Our booth No.is No.26 Lane B,Hall 1.2.Please login the website www.ciff-gz.com to know more about the fair.More than 10 kinds of new design chairs will be shown in our booth.You are always welcome to our booth or to our factory at your earlier convenience if you have this visit plan for our record.
Ok,any inquiry to our product,please feel free to contact me.
Thanks and best regards.
Have a nice day!
Jonathan Yeung(杨卉明）
1.I hope this e-mail find you well.
我希望这封电子邮件好好找到你?这句话怪怪的,没有人在信里这样写,所以最好去掉.
2.I am going to tell you that we are set to attend the 26th China International Furniture Fair (Guangzhou) from 3th to 6th Sept,2010.
I am goting to tell you that we are set...可以直接改成 We are about to attend the.
3.Please login the website www.ciff-gz.com to know more about the fair.
应该改成Please visit our website...for more information about the fair.
4.More than 10 kinds of new design chairs will be shown in our booth.
new design chairs?应该是newly designed chairs吧!
5.You are always welcome to our booth or to our factory at your earlier convenience if you have this visit plan for our record.
You are always welcome to visit our booth or our factory...后面的有些怪...我觉得你可以直接改成at a day that is convenience for you...英文里...不应该有太多information crammed in one sentence.
6.Ok,any inquiry to our product,please feel free to contact me.
Besides,if you have any inquiry to our products,please feel free to contact us.
7.最后的,就是have a nice day应该在best regards那句的前面.best regards应该是在最后说的.