英语文章求检查语法和润色什么的.

英语文章求检查语法和润色什么的.
题目大概意思是让你说说对犯人是送*好还是进行教育好.250词.下边是我写的.
Above all,I can not completely agree with the two practices.
Sending criminals to the * positively is not an effective way to deal with them,but we all know that some criminals are dangerous; sending them to the * actually means a protection to other citizens.In likewise,education and training are better indeed,but what if the criminals have dispute with theirteacher?
However,im*ment without any human-oriented management and education seems to disrespecthuman rights.Nowadays,death penalty has been called off in many regions by beingaccused of disrespect for newgate saint’s human rights.So that chances forcriminals to reduce penalty and even reform themselves make good sense.
Gratifyingly,there are many such places in the world that collect the criminals and educate them as well.Do you know where the national college entrance examination papers isproduced?It is in the *.That is,criminals are not only suffering the im*ment but also accepting the reformation through labour.I think it is away that got the best of both worlds.In one hand the criminals got what they deserved,in the other hand,they provide us some things that are unsuitable tobe produced in other places.They make contributions to the society,what ismore,they can found the value of life in labor.
Moreover,many countries have handled in the same way and it takes effect.So I think penalty combined with reform should be considered a good way to deal with criminals.