关于ONLY的语法问题,下面这句话有问题么?该怎么改?

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关于ONLY的语法问题,下面这句话有问题么?该怎么改?
Only in this way more and more people willing to make contributions to society and our society will become more prosperous.这句话的语法正确么?不正确的话有什么好的改法呢?最好能改的地道一些~

不正确~ONLY在前面,后面应该要倒装啊~而且willing也不能单独用,要用be willing to Only in this way,are more and more people willing to make contributions to society and our society will become more prosper...