看看这句英语有没有语病谢谢

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看看这句英语有没有语病谢谢
At that age,kids are the most fearful creature,they are curious,they like actions and they have the children-pretected law.

看不懂“the most fearful creature”想表达什么意思,要表达“吓人的,令人恐惧的”可以用frightening,但也不通,无解
they like actions改成they are activity(hyperactive程度太深)
children-pretected law改成Children's Protection Act那个是因为在书上看见过“You are such a charming creature.” 不能这么用么?fearful是形容事物本质的,fearful creature指的是恐惧的生物,感到害怕的生物(生物本身感到恐惧),而表示“吓人的,令人恐惧的”则要用frightening了,这样会比较符合“可怕的生物”的意思。