谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语短文有什么语法错误.

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谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语短文有什么语法错误.
Hello,everyone.
I am a sunny girl.My biggest feature is a pair of small eyes.My mother always says I laugh eyes like a crack,but I don’t think so.There are a lot of people say I like a Korean.I think no matter what other people say,do me the most beautiful!I also like reading books,I think I can learn a lot of things.I also like to travel,because travel can make people humble.My hobby is debate,I participated in this months the school debate tournament.I think the debates can exercise my eloquence.
This is me.Do you want to make friends with me?
That’s all.Thank you.

Hello, everyone.I am an outgoing girl. one of my maint features is a pair of small eyes. My mother always says I laugh eyes with my eye ball unseen,but I don’t think so. There are a lot of people say...ball unseen查不到什么意思。还有There are a lot of people say I am like a Korean.这里你帮我改的am好像有点 错。我不是说我喜欢韩国而是说有很多人说我像韩国人。能帮我解答吗?with my eye ballsunseen 意为笑起来,眼球就看不见了。。。eye balls眼球的意思。。。直接说a lot of people say I am like a Korean。。。把 there are去掉。。。。这是我的失误。。。还有问题吗