英语:帮我修改一下这几句英语.看有没有什么语法错误之类的.

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英语:帮我修改一下这几句英语.看有没有什么语法错误之类的.
When you see this post, perhaps you do not love me, maybe she has occupied most of your life.
Thank you for staying with me a year.Although this result isn’twhat I want
Darling,please allow me to call you like this
It seems impossible.
The end of the story, the bestto wish you

呃,这位仁兄,真是一塌糊涂啊,你最好发个中文版本让我给你翻译好了,真不知道你在说什么,句子虽然语法有一些是对的,但是上下文根本无关,东一榔头西一棒槌,简直是...我都看不下去了!如果坚持要这一版,下面是语法部分的...