帮我修改一下下这篇英语文章,帮我修改一下,看看有什么句子不够好的,帮我改改,越多越好．谢谢了!we made an activity survey last week.we asked all students of class 12,grade 8.in our chart,most students watch tv every day.some students watch tv twice a week.others watch tv four times a week.about having sports,some students do it every day .20%students have sports twice a week.and most students have four times a week.all students do their homework every day.nobody does it twice a week or four times a
帮我修改一下下这篇英语文章,
帮我修改一下,看看有什么句子不够好的,帮我改改,越多越好．谢谢了!
we made an activity survey last week.we asked all students of class 12,grade 8.in our chart,most students watch tv every day.some students watch tv twice a week.others watch tv four times a week.about having sports,some students do it every day .20%students have sports twice a week.and most students have four times a week.all students do their homework every day.nobody does it twice a week or four times a week.we found that all students in class12,grade 8 study hard.and they also like having sports.
We carried out an activity survey last week. We asked all students in Class 12, Grade 8. And we drew a chart using the survey results.
In our chart, most students watch TV everyday. Some students watch TV twice a week. And others watch it four times a week.
Under sports activities, we have some students doing exercises everyday, 20% of the students play sports twice per week, and most students engage in sports activities four times a week.
All the students do their homework everyday. There is no exception on any of the days.
In conclusion, we found that all the students in Class 12, Grade 8 study hard and play hard, and they like sports activities very much. How do you think?
We made an activity survey last week.All the students of Class 12,Grade 8 were asked by a survey form,most students watch TV every day,some of them watch Tv twice a week,others four times a week. About having sports,some students do that every day .20% students have sports twice a week,and most students have four times a week.All the students do their homework every day.Nobody does it twice a week or four times a week.We found that all students in Class 12,Grade 8 study hard,and they also like having sports.
We carried out an activity survey last week. We asked all students in Class 12, Grade 8. And we drew a chart using the survey results.
In our chart, most students watch TV everyday. Some students watch TV twice a week. And others watch it four times a week.
Under sports activities, we have some students doing exercises everyday, 20% of the students play sports twice per week, and most students engage in sports activities four times a week.
All the students do their homework everyday. There is no exception on any of the days.
In conclusion, we found that all the students in Class 12, Grade 8 study hard and play hard, and they like sports activities very much.
为了鲜明，我把改过的部分用了大写。
we made an activity survey last week.we asked all THEstudents of Class 12,Grade 8(这是真的需要大写).in our chart,most OF THE students watch tv every day.some students watch tv twice a week.others watch tv four times a week. about DOing sports,some students do it every day .20%students DO sports twice a week.and most students DO four times a week.all THE students do their homework every day.nobody does it twice a week or four times a week.we found that all students in class12,grade 8 study hard.and they also like DOing sports.