帮我看下语法有没有错误 哪里错了可以帮忙修改一下
帮我看下语法有没有错误 哪里错了可以帮忙修改一下
My Dad told me he want to be a backpacker and with me goes to travel.
In fact,I'm really happy but I pretend nothing had happened.
I want to try some different some amazing living even I can go to travel part-time and work part-time.
I'm looking forward to it.
My Dad told me he wanted to be a backpacker and go to travel with me.
In fact,I was really happy but I pretended nothing had happened.
I want to try some different and amazing living （even I can go to travel part-time and work part-time）（这句话有问题但是我不知道你想说什么?并且我也不知道你是想表达当时的感受还是一直如此?只能大概改一下前面了）.
I'm looking forward to it.括号里我想说（甚至可以边打工边旅游我也无所谓）不知道怎么写那可以这样：I want to try some different and amazing living even I must do part-time work in the journey. 我居然把work可不可数给忘了对不起……你再看一下吧