会英语的来!帮忙看看这段短文有错吗

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会英语的来!帮忙看看这段短文有错吗
Destruction of the natural environment in people at the same time,many problems will arise - and the destruction of soil,climate change and energy waste,greenhouse effect,reduction in forest area,biodiversity reduction,chemical pollution,over-exploitation of marine and coastal Strip pollution,air pollution ......
The earth is our mother,we should be concerned about the Earth,the protection of the earth,protect the natural environment.It is our responsibility to protect the environment.We should begin with ourselves,from our side to start,saving natural resources,materials recycling,use less plastic ......the little things we can do!

many problems apppear as people destroy the environment indiscriminately(肆意地).
destruction of soil,changes of the climate,the waste of energy,greenhouse effect,reduction of forest area,biodiversity reduction.后面不用改了