这篇英语短文帮忙看看都错哪了

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这篇英语短文帮忙看看都错哪了
中文及英文从语法错误请帮助指出来.
亲爱的 XX
我的名字叫做XXX.我来自中国吉林省吉林市,中国的北方城市.即将寄宿在你家,得知被安排在你家我十分高兴.
我14岁了,1999年出生.我的英文不好,所以,可能会有些麻烦.
我的英文名叫做TOM,所以 你们可以叫我TOM.我喜欢运动和看书.比如游泳,玩球类运动.
我将在8月12日到8月25日住在您家里.
这是我第一次走出国门.你有什么一些我该知道的建议,或提前准备?
DearXX
My name is XXX.I come fromJiLincity andjilinprovincial of china.China's northern
cities.Soon lodge in your
family.That was placed in your home life,I am very pleased.
I am 14 years old.I was born1999.My English is not good .So,maybe have some troubles.
My English name is Tom,So you can call me Tom.I like sports and watch
book.Such as swim,play the ball games.
I will be August 12 toAugust 25 living in your home
This is my first time to go abroad.would you have somem suggestions fou me
on anying fou me onanying that I should know or be prepared for.
YourXX

My name is XXX,I come from jilin city of jilin province ,which is a city in the north of China.I will be boarding in your house.And being informed of living in your house,i I am very pleased.
I'm 14 years old,born in 1999.as my English is not good,so there might be some trouble.
My English name is TOM,so you can call me TOM.I like sports and reading.Such as swimming,playing ball games.
I will be living in your home from 12 August to 25 August .
This is my first time abroad.
I wonder if you have some advice,or preparations in advance.
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