英语句子语法错误,谁能帮忙改正,

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英语句子语法错误,谁能帮忙改正,
Obviously,these students can increase their knowledge and broaden their vision when they reach their third and fourth years

显然,当这些学生到第三和第四年的时候,就能增加知识和开阔视野.