这句英语句子对不对

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这句英语句子对不对
Some students are in favor of emigration because zoo will make tourists,traffic jams,the zoo from the suburban environment will be much better

这里混用了will,与lead to/cause 的用法.
典型的中式英语错误.当你想表示一种因果关系时,用因果连词,而不是WILL来表示影响.