看一下我的句子有没有出错

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看一下我的句子有没有出错
“Adversity causes men to break ,”Indeed,but people always forget the rest of the saying “Others to break records.”

单词 others 这里是冗余的,其实这样说就可以了:“Adversity causes men to break."Indeed,but people always forget the word that follows:records.也就是说Adversity causes men to break records.我想我的写法使...