求英语大神看看这句话有没有语法问题~

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求英语大神看看这句话有没有语法问题~
when i was young my parents worked in the big city, they left me to my grandma, grandma and i lived in the countryside. still till now, few people ever asked or cared about my study, so now i am very capable of doing things independently.
小时候我的父母到大城市打工,我和奶奶生活在农村,直到现在,也很少有人过问我的学习,因此我有着很强的独立做事的能力.
求看看语法是否正确~可、或者可否改进一下
大二以下水平勿扰谢谢

小时候我的父母到大城市打工,我和奶奶生活在农村,直到现在,也很少有人过问我的学习,因此我有着很强的独立做事的能力.(1) When I was a small boy , My parents have gone to big cities for work . Both my grandm...