STUDY PLAN 语法,搭配问题改错

STUDY PLAN 语法,搭配问题改错
STUDY PLAN
My name is j,I was born in Mar,l996.From 2002 to 2008 I studied at xxSchool,and from 2008 to now I'm at xx middle School.
I am a responsible,Friendly and warmhearted person.I have so many hobbies
,such as swimming,skating,playing football,and listen to music .I especially like to listening to punk music,such as sum 41 ,simple plan……These band are great,
In recent years,many friends and classmates of mine go to study abroad.Of course have study In the Canada.,From my friends and the Internet I know that Canada is a beautiful country with so many beautiful sceneries
IT is not only good learning environment but also owns an advanced education system and science.This makes me yearning to study in the Canada,want to study abroad.I think also got the support of your family,I aspire to learn not disappoint them to my expectation.Now I will entrust my friend to submit my application to the education department in Richmond,British Columbia.
If I could study in Canada,I am planning to major in natural science.I really like natural science since childhood.I know that Canada's natural science is a leading international status.In natural science,I prefer physics and psychology.Now I am drawing up a study plan.My plan is to complete my courses in senior high school in order make further progress in my English and Through my hard work was the ideal university study of natural science.
My parents have only one son,I hope I could repay them and my motherland when
I finish my studies I will go back to my country.The reasons for it are as follows:Firstly,I am Chinese,China is my motherland.Secondly,I have duty is to come back to take care of my parents according to Chinese tradition..I believe that at that time China must have fully developed,which will provide with much bigger space for me to put my talent to good use.
Studying in Canada will help me to realize the life's leap.Thanks for taking your time to read my words.Kindly please consider my application and give a young ambitions man a chance to realize his dream.
Yours sincerely x
Date Aug 30,2010
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