我写了一篇英语作文,希望英语高手帮我检查一下语法以及意思用法上有没有什么问题.I plan to go to Yunnan to visit my grandmother and some other people.They miss me very much.The weather there is always cool,I think.Because Kunming is the Spring City.I plan to take a train to go there.I’d like to go there with my family.I’d like to visit Dali and some other places of interest.I’d like to take a camera,a pair of sunglasses and so on.My birthday was in July.I want to celebrate it with my grandmot

我写了一篇英语作文,希望英语高手帮我检查一下语法以及意思用法上有没有什么问题.
I plan to go to Yunnan to visit my grandmother and some other people.They miss me very much.
The weather there is always cool,I think.Because Kunming is the Spring City.I plan to take a train to go there.I’d like to go there with my family.
I’d like to visit Dali and some other places of interest.I’d like to take a camera,a pair of sunglasses and so on.
My birthday was in July.I want to celebrate it with my grandmother and old friends.But I think it will be late,
I think I will have a wonderful time.
另外。我的学生证在操场上丢失了可以理解为My Student ID losts on the playground吗？