英语翻译

ERIC来广州出差,他打算花一天的时间逛逛广州.但是担心时间不够,他列下了在广州要游览的地方.
Eric went on business trip in Guang Zhou and intended to spend one single day look over there.But what he worried
about was that the time was not enough to do that.So he make a list of where he wanted to visit.
他最先想去的地方是越秀公园.越秀公园虽然四周扩建了一些现代便民设施,但它仍然是一个吸引游人和附近居民的地方.让他最为震撼的是位于山顶的镇海楼里陈列了许多不同朝代的历史珍宝.

The place he wanted to go most was Yue Xiu parkwhere attracts a plenty of tourists and habitants because of the the construction around it.what amazed him mostis the Zhen Hai tower in which displaysa lot of treasures of history in different dynasties

接着参观的是中山纪念堂,它包括了一个壮观的纪念堂和一樽纪念孙中山的雕像.最后他以夜游珠江结束了他的旅程.ERIC看到许多灯火辉煌的大厦企力在珠江两岸.


The next stop is Zhong Shan memorial which is comprised of a grand that and sculpture ofSun Yat-sen.He ended up visiting The Pearl River(or: the Zhujiang River).Eric have seen that many brightly-lit mansions stand in both sides of the river.
虽然四周扩建了一些现代便民设施,但它仍然是一个吸引游人和附近居民的地方.
以上这句话,应该是因果关系吧!因为四周扩建了一些现代便民设就行了,所以它是一个吸引游人和附近居民的地方.
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