英语好的 帮我看看这篇英语短文 初一的水平 有错的帮我改一下

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英语好的 帮我看看这篇英语短文 初一的水平 有错的帮我改一下
Hello, everyone, my name is ChuboYang, 12 years old. I come from shijia. I am glad we became friends and classmates. I enjoy learning, favorite subject is sports. I like to read, because it not only increased my knowledge, but also to improve my writing skills. I am tall, like basketball and football .After school , I will do some of my favorite things, such as playing chess, doing model.I hope the new semester, students and teachers can learn together and happy.

Hello,everyone,my name is Chu Boyang.I'm 12 years old.I come from shijia.I am glad we become friends and classmates.I enjoy learning,and my favorite subject is sports.I like reading,because it can not only increased my knowledge,but also improve my writing skills.I am tall,so I like playing basketball and football .After school ,I usually do some of my favorite things,such as playing chess and making model.I hope we can learn together happily this term.