英语 修改病句 求大神指点

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英语 修改病句 求大神指点

There were people who would be glad to see him leave the place,he knew it.

On hearing the false accusation against her,her face went white

The idea he mentioned at first shouded good 

He gave many reasons for the failure , but the reason not convincing

The children promised to be careful and that they would return home early


There were people who would be glad to see him leave the place and he knew it.
On hearing the false accusation,her face went white.
The idea he first mentioned sounded good
He gave many reasons for the failure,but none of them was convincing
The children promised to be careful and return home early